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Submitted: July 31, 2006
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I'm going through some changes right now...

Comments would be nice, and faves would be wonderful.
Please, critique! I take critiques very well as long as you aren't rude about it.

character LunaSong and image ©
Which is me... yeah...
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So pretty.<3 I love how you did the hair and feet.
Well alright. I feel like the lines arent dark enough for something made with lineart. I assume perhaps you scanned something and continued to paint it digitally. The other thing I see is related...in that the colors sometimes do not approach all the way to the lines, leaving some 'white tidbits.' I have alot of suggestions to help fix it...I first learned photoshop by learning to color in lineart, and had many of the same issues...but to give suggestions I'd have to know what method you use.
this is such a wonderful concept. i do notice that around the hair,tail, etc the lines are kind of rough and makes the image look choppy. Maybe you could blend them in a bit to look as smooth as the rest of the pictures. I love thte colors you chose :)
AW she loosk beautifull!!! the way you made her liek that is so amazing!!! hr hair and her tail its liek she was in water or liek floating in the air with so much of the force in her heart |3 .. wlel somethign liek that XDDD; but it is beautifull!!!

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NEW ACCOUNT! go there please
very sweet, i love the movement of the fur and the detail :heart: awesome work
I really love the way the fur on her back paws looks, it looks so soft and wonderful. I haven't paid enough attention to your character to understand what changes there are though? I think this is gorgeous, however. <3

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Yeah, I'm a female dog... What's your excuse?

Arcanine! <3
I just edited it. I don't know if that makes a difference. I wanted to make it look like a digital painting rather than a drawing which was hard to do without my tablet. I think it looks better now. I used layers and painted over the lineart... I didn't like the way the dark lines all over looked so I coloured over most... I believe I got rid of all the white. Could you look at it agian and then tell me what you think now. Tell me if you still think it needs changing.

Thanks.

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Thanks. The only real changes to her are her ears and her nose, so it's nothing drastic.

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A positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will annoy enough people to make it worth the effort.
Herm Albright (1876 - 1944)
Yes it is very nice! ^_^ From what I can see there really isn't any mistakes to address. Great job!

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